Could you please tell me my errors and correct them (I try to do a writing) does this sound natural? The high school "Raúl Porras Barrenechea", founded in 1980, is located in the district of Carmen de la Legua-Reynoso in Callao. The community is in an ind (2024)

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@Emyn90 Grammatically there are not many mistakes, however, some sentences sound a little unnatural, for example, "the community is in an industrial zone", "is in" could be replaced with "is located in"
"due to it has" sounds unnatural to me, I'd use "since it has"
"for it's large population" it's complex, but If you intend that "for" to explain, "because of" or "due to" would fit much better, If, on the other hand, you mean "disorderly urban growth toward it's large population" either "towards" Or "to" are the correct words to use.
By the way, I can't explain why, but "disordered urban growth rate" sound better to me.
"young people and adults do not even have complete basic education", the correct manner would be "have NOT EVEN complete basic education" if I'm not wrong, since the "not even" is referring to the noun, "complete basic education" in this case.
"that In the case of woman is greater than man" "great" is often not used this way, high could be a GREAT replacement. Nevertheless, the whole sentence has to be reworked, since looking thoroughly into the phrase "in the case of woman is grater (higher) than man" you're saying "the incidence of illiteracy is higher than men" not" than "the man incidence of illiteracy". A good way to replace it without changing it too much could be, "that in the case of woman is higher than how it is in the case of man" although that sound a little bit unnatural In my opinion.
"the community, in turn" I honestly don't know what you mean with "in turn"
"a large part of the students" "the" is unnecessary there, since you are not referring to an specific type of student, but to "students" as a general concept.
"high drug use" use could be replaced with consumption.
hope you have a GREAT day!